love the song. well done!
You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals and guitar.
Great story telling. Did you like specific instrumental parts--vocals and guitar
1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.
Very nice cut, with some Bob Seger influences. The mood stays solid from start to finish, with a nice dynamic break just around 2:37 and a memorable hook. Really well crafted song. This would work well in the right TV or film setting.
Really good demo! This song has great potential.
Love this song. The lyrics are terrific, you painted the picture and told me the story! So sad.havent we all been there?
Why this isn't already being used in part or whole in a movie or tv show, I don't know. Nice Voice, very emotion filled performance. I am sure you are already an active performer doing very well!