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A plead to give their love another chance, and for Just One More Day.
JUST ONE MORE DAY
(c) WORDS AND MUSIC BY WARREN HEIN AND PAT ELLWEIN
I SEARCH YOUR EYES BUT THEY'RE LIKE MIRRORS
MY THOUGHTS SHINE BACK AT ME
IS THERE SOMEONE ELSE? YOUR LIPS JUST QUIVER
WILL YOU OPEN UP AND SPEAK
CAN YOU LET YOUR HEART BE HEARD?
IF THERE'S A CHANCE FOR US
WE'LL NEED EVERY WORD
I HOPE WE'LL HAVE TOMORROW
OUR LOVE CAN'T END THIS WAY
THERE'S NO MORE TIME TO BORROW
PLEASE GIVE US ONE MORE DAY
WON'T YOU STAY
JUST ONE MORE DAY
SHARE THE REASONS FOR YOUR SADNESS
SIT DOWN IF JUST ONCE MORE
WE CAN WORK THROUGH ALL THIS MADNESS
IF WE CUT RIGHT TO THE CORE
YOU MAY SEE DARK, BUT I SEE LIGHT
WE'VE SHARED ONE HEART SO LONG
LET'S GET THIS RIGHT?
YEAH WE'VE GOT PROBLEMS BABY
DON'T GIVE UP SO FAST
I KNOW YOUR HEART IS HEADED FOR THAT DOOR
WE HAVE OUR FRUSTRATIONS
BUT IF WE'RE GUNNA LAST
ONE MORE DAY COULD SHOW THE WAY
TO THE LOVE WE HAD BEFORE
The master of melody, Warren, is back! If Air Supply needed some grit and punch for their soft ballads, here it is. But this power ballad would work well for any pop balladeer these days. It starts with mellow tones and builds to an urgent plead and sounds like an anthem as it progresses. Sounds like the making of power hit to me! Great instrumentation and powerful, pleading vocals. Lyrically conversational with everyday language, yet put together like an exquisite poem. Very well done!
I really enjoyed it . nice voice tone
real good recording.
love the way the drums & bass interact
good harmonies & instrumentation
hoping to hear more of your stuff
WOW!!! What a great tune, there's nothing I don't like about this song in any way. Had my foot tapping the second everything kicked in, Would be very surprised if this doesn't get signed up and would do well on it's own just as a single sale. Great song!!!
Nice Styx feel to this work. Good job
+ love this from the start
+ verses build a story and flow into a strong chorus
+ Reminds me of an Elton John-like Disney movie tune
+ guitar, piano, and synth parts all build a strong piece
+ harmonies well-done
+ pre-chorus really builds into chorus
+ vocal range and tone I love.
+ Would definitely want to hear more.
great intro...very iconic..perfect for film t/v in that respect
I really like the vocals and the drums, the rhythm guitar really sounds good as well.
Really cool song!! I can hear this in a film!..it has an 80's vibe to it:) great vocals and production! !.great catchy hook!!
I love this song, and you bring out the emotions in the song, especially when the vocalist goes into the higher notes. The background vocals are in the right spot. I like the arrangement.
Wow! I thought I was listening to Robin Thick or Justin Timberlake. Beyond awesome.
Really love this song. Could hear it on the radio in a more mastered version for sure.
Good vocals - nice instrumentation with great tones. I like the dynamics that change from verse to chorus - very effective.
Good pop/rock love song. Good structure.
Great tune. I liked it 5 seconds in. Very clean recording (vocal and instrumental), great instrumentation, solid lead vocals, solid background vocals, great mood changes, nice ending (echo effect). Catchy tune. I havent been on here long, but I have no intention of handing out 4 stars to just anyone. Congrats. I'll be checking out more of your work.
What a beautiful song. You remind me a little of Damien Rice. Loved the lyrics and your vocals.