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really like your voice / singing - keep it up!
JL, Pros: Nice voice, nice story. Good vocal phrasing...Cons: The melody of the hook is not strong enough. It's a great lyrical hook, but could use an improved melody to support it.....Also, would like to hear some more dynamic instrumentation to support the vocal......Song has great potential, but needs some production work....Hope this helps...Roy
Thanks Roy, I appreciate the Pros and the Cons that you gave me.
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