It's a lonely city

Story Behind The Song

characters are people i've met and things i've seen,observing city life

Song Description

song with characters ,living hard in the city,with a message

Song Length 4:40 Genre Folk - Contemporary, Pop - Easy Listening
Tempo Medium (111 - 130) Lead Vocal Male Vocal
Mood Moving, Poignant Subject General, Existence
Language English Era 2000 and later

Lyrics

IT'S A LONELY CITY (c) Dennis Makepeace
Johnny wont have a fire, no burning in his soul,
He's sitting on the corner by the station hotel, as the people come and go
Spare a little change sir? no one wants to know,
He doesn't have a hearts desire, as he waits there in the cold,
chorus
Its a lonely city ,its a lonely city, I know
Its a lonely city, its a lonely city, I know

Susie hangs out on the corner,
In her little black dress, she's looking so good,
She's a working girl with a kid at home,
And she's getting by anyway she could,
Are you looking for business boy?
As she keeps a lookout for the boys in blue
She's only there because life's unfair,
But She'll do anything for you,-- If you pay her to
chorus
Its a lonely city ,its a lonely city, I know (hi hi hi)
Its a lonely city, its a lonely city, I know (hi hi )

Some have it easy they don't have to try
Some hit rock bottom never knowing why
There are gangs on the corner with guns and knives
Caught on camera as another kid dies
Low lifes looking for another high
Mothers and Fathers with tears to cry
Mothers and Fathers with tears to cry

Susie could be your daughter ,Johnny might be your son,
Or it could be you sitting over there ,thinking that lifes' race was run,
Are you looking for business boy?
Spare a little change sir?
chorus
Its a lonely city ,its a lonely city, I know (hi hi)
Its a lonely city, its a lonely city, I know (hi hi)
spare a little change sir?
~~( alternate verse)
your'e looking good in your business suit,
your leather briefcase and your shiny black shoes
with your back up straight and your head held high
but underneath we're all the same inside

Great storyline !

This is a thoughtful song so telling of life foe many in this day....life for so many is not fair for one reason or another. Your vocal was very clear and direct, easy to understand your lyrics well done.

enjoyable folk tune. Nice to hear the lyrics clear and concise.

I really enjoyed this song, great folk feel and a great performance by the vocalist. I like the harmonies and thought the secondary guitar added a lot. The drums do a lot to drive the song forward, and there recording is excellent all around

catchy track with lots of potential very likeable track. liked the vocal style and chorus was great liked the breakdwown part too

Nice groove, nice voice, nice instrumental interlude, nice vocal 'duet' bits

The subject is worthy of song, we may lose everything and be forced to beg some day. The singing voice is very pleasant and effortless. And the hej hej hej sounds Danish/Swedish and not American/English, which is fine with Danish me.

Nice groove. Enjoyed the guitar lead. The vocal is emotionally evocative, appropriate for the song.

Like this song. The voice works well in the mix and lyrics tell a good story. THe instrumentation is tasteful and supportive on the melody. Nice instrumental break. Enjoyed the song.

like the spirit of this tune...really like the lead guitar, bass work too...

Good storytelling.
Nice gentle vocal.
Rhythm just at right tempo.

Highly original and very musical with a good listenability factor whether you're into hearing the story unfold or just enjoying the music. The chorus could be licensed for TV/movie for backdrop to a street scene.

Lyrics Dennis Makepeace Music Dennis Makepeace
Producer Dennis Makepeace Publisher Dennis Makepeace
Performance Dennis Makepeace

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