The instrumentation sounds great.
The quality of the lyrics is good.
Shades of Bob Dylan ! Great lyrics that get the message over loud and clear .
Nice sound on the guitar and well played. Music has a light feel while the lyrics a bit dark in keeping with the theme of the song. Singer has a pleasing voice.
This poet/songwriter strongly reminds me of Simon and Garfunkel and maybe Bob Dylan. The lyrics are well-crafted, hard-hitting and thought-provoking. This song asks more questions than it answers. There's something deep and awesome about it. It touches the heart of the listener, as these are thoughts that mill around inside of us as we ponder the sad state of the world we live in with all its crazy conflicts.
Love this lyric: So madmen walk among us, fighting in religions' name shooting up the innocents and passing on the blame, killing all our children, and calling it a war, was violence and mindlessness what Jesus suffered for?
The politicians are always passing the blame...this is so true. Can we number all the victims? Not a chance.
This is a great song. Extremely talented writer. Nice intro, great guitar and vocal. But the message/content is what really makes this song shine.
Great subject and a nice voice... I get it
First off, I must say that your voice and music style reminds me a lot of Billy Joel. I LOVE Billy Joel, so I was pretty happy when this song began. This song felt like a bit of a blast to the past, but there is never anything wrong with that. The market potential is pretty good in my opinion. It won't ever be in the top 100 songs or anything, but it has some potential for a sync of some sort.
Very nice guitar work and interesting chording.
Good story line.
Nice voice.
Most of the lyric strikes me as beautifully strong and poignant. You had my attention from the first line. My initial concept of the 'playground' was all the places we go to relax and that fit the dressing up and playing soldier image of the first verse. But when you went to children never grown up, the image got muddled so I though maybe you were referencing only school shootings. But in either case, the individual verses are strong. More clarity could make them tie together with less confusing of the meaning.
Exceptionally well done in all respects. Great lyrics, extraordinary melody and vocal delivery. Definitely would enjoy hearing more from this seriously gifted artist at work.
Wonderful voice, pithy lyrics. I am in full agreement with the sentiment. War makes nice young boys murderers, it should not go on happening.
SIMPLY A TOUCHING SONG--thank you--really nice feeling and flow to this song!--NJ.
Enjoyed this folk song. Nice guitar arrangement, and a natural, honest and expressive-sounding vocal. The meaningful lyrics are sung very clearly. It's a pity that we don't hear more songs like this in the mainstream market today. Keep up the good work.
Sounds really pleasant.
The guitar playing is playful and cool.
Overall length and flow of the tune is right.
Nice acoustic guitar performance. Good melody. Good hook. Nice song.