hope you get to do a streaming / broadcast quality production of this "cute budding romance ditty". otherwise, clean enough recording too present to potential publishers, artist management located in NashVegas. CHEERS!
You lyric magic continues, my friend. Really nice work. It is good to her you again.
If I had any suggestions it would be to tighten up the song in length a or and maybe taking the final verse, chorus up one key to give a surprise at the end.. But that's just me.
Best Always
Peter
The thing I really like about this song is the freshness of the lyrics. The story is well told...you can just see the couple dancing out in the green field all by themselves. This would make a great song for a romantic movie! Favorite rhyme: Bass drops/tied in knots. Now that's as fresh as it gets. Love the lyric about the fancy club and strobe lights (not needed). The only thing is that sometimes it seems just a bit rushed, maybe more in the beginning. Maybe I got used to it toward the end. I say, "Why rush a good song?" This one has merit and I hope you go far with it, Amy!