Ascension developing and personal voice to enhance the spiritual statetment for this particular time especially. It has a esual quality and an individual experience to a religious event that touches the soul and reaches outward expressively. The happiness melodically expands from within and an honest thought arrives to the audience! Original expression and feeling is great.
I thought the hook was great. The lead vocal was okay. The chords you used were good for this song. I keep singing the hook
Speaking the intro was a good touch actually. Sometimes that's a refreshing bit to have at the beginning, something different. I think you're playing and singing this? If you are that's an impressive feat. The singing wasn't bad and matched in pitch for the most part. The hook wasn't too bad and the key wasn't a bad choice either.
Here is a clear home recording of a short song about the resurrection and "aliveness" of Jesus Christ. Sung with an obvious love and honesty, the recording, though simple, is clear and heartfelt.
jus needs a propper recording hit up a local studio..