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Dave, Nice job on More Than A Man.
Hey Dave, I like C-O-U-N-T-R-Y. :)
Thanks, Brian!
On The Eighth Day... Good Idea...Good Song.
Dave, Congratulations. I see that you had a song pitched by NSAI at the pitch to publishers luncheon. Which song?
Thanks, Brian. It was "Yes Dear, Whatever You Say Dear".
I remember that song. Great job. Hoping the best for you.
Not That Much ~ Loving it right up.Not That Much ~ Just kiddin.Great song Dave.
Hi Dave, On your review of Her Hearts Been Fooled Again you wrote" Nice melody, I wish this song had lyrics" Got any you wanna share... kenney
Kenney: what is your email address?
kenneyn@msn.com
You guys are funny.
you guys ever really listen to the lyrics that are used on the most popular rock songs out there? Most don't make sense or follow a story or even a patten. My advise is just throw out the lyrics and see what happens. 175 rhymes with alive, strive contrive, dive. there you go. "DONT TO THE 175, ITS A DIV ITS A DIVE. Just have some fun dude. BE STUPID AND HAVE SOME FUN.
one of my songs go as follows. KILL FOR THE KING BUT LETS NEVER REGRET. FUCK FOR PEACE BUT LETS NEVER FORGET. THE ROAD TO FREEDOM IS A BOX OF GRENADES. KILL FOR THE KING AND LETS ALL GO GET LAID. What? Are you kidding me? Worst lyrics of all time or so bad they are great? Who cares. Its art. Anything goes........
Thanks for your very thoughtful review of "Oh What A Christmassy Christmas". Your suggestions are very helpful.
You are welcome, Dave, have a CHRISTMASY CHRISTMAS! thanks for helping me to enjoy it a little more. Mrs. Kate
Thanks for your very thoughtful review of "A Thousand Miles".
It's a great tune Dave! Jeff
Thanks for reviewing "Oh What A Christmassy Christmas". I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for reviewing "Every Sunday I Pray". I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for reviewing "Oh What A Christmassy Christmas".
Hi Dave!!! Thank you very much for the review of, "A Starry Night's Dream"!!! I really appreciate it!!!
Thanks for your very thoughtful review of "I'm Married To Her Mother". You really went above and beyond the call of duty.
Hey Dave, Thanks so much for the review of Fairytales & Ecstacy!!!
Hey Dave, thank you very much for your reveiws on "If I've Loved you Enough" and " Poker Run" by the way Most bike Groups get together and have a poker Run to raise money foy different events, Thanks again
thanx much Dave for your review of Margo, and yeah the "don't lose track she'll stab you in the back" is there because it rhymed, and kinda fit with the hooker theme...LOL...thanks for listening. Warren Hein
your christmas song--is just beautiful--thanxs--5 stars--joe.
Thanks, Joe.
Hey Dave..... Thanks for the nice review if my song, "The Last Riders On Route 66". It is a song based on my novel with the same title. The song won The Grand Prize in The International Route 66 Theme Song Contest in 2002. The story is a semi-autobiography of some of my hitch-hiking adventures back in the 1960's. By the way, the song begins, "It was the Spring of '67/ When this story starts.....". Keep up the nice reviews.... Chet Nichols Inductee - The Kansas Music Hall if Fame
thanxs for reviewing my song /CHRISTMAS BLUES/--lots of folks like that song--i have had a lot of fun with song--it is my most played and liked song out of all of my songs--been on top 10 unique holiday songs many times--joe
Check out my Christmas song: http://www.broadjam.com/artists/songs.php?artistID=93019&mediaID=588831 1
Thanks for your thoughtful review of "Yes Dear, Whatever You Say Dear". I hope you'll get a chance to review more of my songs.
Thanks for the thank you Dave. I look forward to hearing more- it was a strong fun song :)
Hi Dave, glad you liked Chicken in the Pan. Now, as we would say in Callahan, FL, Go Get You some! Have a great Thanksgiving eating TURKEY!!! Mrs. Kate
Dave, Thanks for reviewing It Can't Last. I see that you are in Nashville, and I assume that you are following your dream. Wishing you my very best on your journey. Alan
trhanxs for the review of my song/i'l meet you at the rodeo/--joe
Hi Dave! Thank you for your very positive review of my song "Model In Disguise." I will definitely keep your comment about the word 'cowgirl' in mind. Thank, Thomas
Hi Dave Thanks for the review Charles
Dave, Thanks for your review of "More Than A Memory Can Give" . Would be interested in hearing your detailed suggestions for improving the scores. None of my songs are radio ready ... they are just demos. :)
Janet: I think the best way to improve this song is to work on the lyrics. The main character is seeking answers from his old flame. He's not going to get them there. Those answers have to come from within.
Thank You for the insight Dave.
I see your point. However, the 2nd line in the song "you know me better than I ever knew myself" sets it up for that line at the end when he asks the question" Can this heart love that way again ... tell me ... since you know me better than I know myself... can you answer that question? He believes if he could jst look into her eyes again... he would know. He wants to move on, but only if she has no love in her heart for him. I can see how the song could be written from you perspective as well, but I think i like it the way it is. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Thank you for your review of my song. Please feel free to elaborate on your marks. I'm always open to hearing the reasons for low scores and appreciate any feedback I can get.
I'm always looking for co-writers. My strength is on the lyrics side.