It felt like it was telling a story even though it was an instrumental. I liked the change of pace you inserted into the song.

I like the slight twists put in enhancing blues progression--- you know its blues but the nuanced changes are nicely done -- really like the deliberate melody lines that make this a true instrumental and not just a guitar jam song -- I especially especially like the interludes that break and float off into areas before coming back to the head of the tune... well written, well played, good work. This could be used commercially in a movie or tv or commercial to set a mood

Nice start. Great feel.