The composer here is obviously quite experienced and has talent. I thought the melody worked well and I especially liked the new passage/instrumental break where the music changed for a while.
I'm no lyricist, but I thought the lyrics were very good.
Definitely a catchy tune, I'd say the song writer has been writing a good long while and has some talent.
Heartfelt vocals, easy to understand lyrics. Interesting production approach. I like this lyric: I wish you harmony, not strife. I like some of your instrumentation choices.