this good im a hard teacher of music after 50 years youve got it you just develop it further!

This is the 2nd time I've gotten this song

Love the synth drums, really killer beat & hook, has a nice 80's vibe to it.

I like the retro style sequencer on the into and the sombre, spooky guitar melody. The vocal arrangement works really well. The lyrics are great, (but see below), and fit the mood of the song nicely. I fact that the vocal melody goes higher at the end of the chorus is a clever touch.

I think there is potential. I do like the lyrics and the melody.

Guitar tone and basic song thought and structure is off to a great start.

Unusual track. I liked it. I think the doubled vox should be used more in the track.

Great Gothic Rock vibe, lyrics, vocals and music! Love it!