The vocals are OK and the overall idea is not bad. Keep writing. There might be a potential tune here.
Very good track, the singer is very good and the song has been built very well. Positive energy! Thanks for sharing!
Lovely voice...powerful and soulful. Great use of backing vocals I like the 'Rollercoaster' idea. Plenty of variety in the song which provides light and shade. Great live band vibe. Energetic in the way Meatloaf was in his prime.