The overall progression of the song is nice. This song has a a really good danceable beat. I like the bass breakdown at 2:23 a lot(and this melody throughout). The synthesizer at 2:55 really makes the song for me and confirms what I was thinking, that this song could go over well at late night dance clubs spinning goth music. This song is definitely danceable.
Really liked the arrangement, think some vocals could add more depth.