Shades of Lou Reed ! Some very interesting chord changes , as per usual Warren !
Warren--You have a great, smooth voice that fits perfectly with this style. Nice work!
This is a very good mix..the fact that it has a few minors chords which give its mysterious,,sad, vibe..over all, the verses and the chorus run together.... more definition would help the whole song in short, nice song but needs definition between verses and chorus other than that.... Good job....
I like this but wanted more of a backstory.
I wanted more specific of why the girl did what she did in the verses and the big payoff in the chorus. Did you like specific instrumental parts--vocals 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? somewhat 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? somewhat