This is a really classy piece! I love it. The vocals are so rich...your voice has a magical timbre to it...great sound. Loved the way the rhythm guitar was in my left headphone and lead in my right. Blended nicely...great mix and excellent playing. Great word pictures and story, could almost feel the sun and see the girl as you sang. Loved the lyric about winking at the men in their business suits. Cute! The key changes and pauses were a nice touch. Well done!
Wow, I like the Spread and the different tones for each guitar. Great use of space. Vocals are balanced good. Great guitar playing, and assist guitar. I like it. Ending chord was perfect to me. ballance of Vocals and Guitar is good, Vocals sit perfect to me in the guitar mix.
Very well layered and chilling piece. Instrumentation is ideal for a piece like this. Too much production would ruin it. Very fun, playful, soulful and catchy tune.
Good piece of work. Great production work and performance. Some interesting tempo changes too. I liked the themes expressed in the lyrics. Good to have a story and familiar references. Certainly a different type of song than you normally get in this category.