10. I'll Do Just Fine

Song Description

A "counterpoint" message to the Kelly Clarkson song "My Life Would Suck Without You". Selected for publication on Women of Substance Radio.

Song Length 3:15 Genre Pop - Rock
Tempo Medium (111 - 130)

Lyrics

I'll Do Just Fine Without You

Justice means you're sorry
Now I've locked the door
Cruelty carries penalties
Now you're just a whore
Funny how you're acting
As if you've got no pain
We both know the truth
You're nothing if not vain

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Cause we have reached our final end
Forget that fence we tried to mend
You simply failed to see
Changes inside of me
I'll do just fine without you

Once when I was jilted
I took it to heart
Now I've learned my lesson
I won't fall apart
This time I'm the jilter
I decide what's next
You couldn't see it coming
Don't look so perplexed

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BRIDGE
Having seen your soul
I now see how shallow
Your juvenile mind
Fails the test of time

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Nice arrangement! Has a nice balance of pop appeal and grit! :-)

damn are you kelly clarkson? great pop-py tune, well crafted writing, very nice mix, quality lead vocal, i hear nothing wrong with this at all!

So easy to go down the line on this one and mark all 5/5. Loved so many things about this song. A truly great song in concept, theme, structure and use of ALL the tools, including pristine production. Thought the vocal tone was spectacular, as was vocal harmonies. Some of those drawn out notes with drive reminded me a little (hope you don't mind the reference) of The Go-Go's with better tone, substance and depth. Especially liked the instrumental backing that worked perfectly with the extraordinary vocal, and how all that blossomed at 0:35. At 0:55 as the vocal moved to the higher pitch the hair on the back of my neck stood on end. 2:30 was another emotional high. Loved all this in a massive way. Nice work.

Lyrics Starburst Music Starburst
Producer Studio Pros Publisher Starburst Music Publishing, LLC dba Dreambusters

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