unique vocal and good hook bluesy rock vibe.

I like the mellow vibe.

interesting song you have here. I like the theme alright. reminds me of early stones some of their songs they did when they were just getting famous. also the inflection in someone is interesting too.

Lyrically it's really strong. The vocalist sings with real conviction. The rhythm guitar has a lovely tone. I like the indie vibe of the song. There is an hypnotic quality to the song. Powerful outro.

I can tell you love music. I can tell you love writing songs, you try to be positive, and you want to spread a positive message. Your skills in production are lacking, but I love the fact that you don't let that hold you back, you just sing what your heart demands and no one is gonna tell you otherwise. Music is life friend... I adore the fact that you've embraced your love affair with music as you have, and encourage you to never stop writing, playing, or performing. Just focus on getting better... Always... Better:) Good luck brother.

interesting voice-opening sounded like doctor roberts--or this bird has flown--GOOD MESSAGE-AND THATS WHAT ITS ALL ABOUT

Great sounding guitar good lyrics song
Sounds good.

Randal, this song is written, sung and performed with passion. You did a great job on writing the lyrics and communicating your message, which is a very important one to hear, very challenging and motivating. I like the way you went from city to city and portrayed different characters in need of help. Good song structure.