If We Had More Time Together

Story Behind The Song

Original I came up with working on songwriting styles in Bergen County Songwriting group.

Song Description

Love found, Love gets stale or ends, Missing how it felt to be young and in love.

Song Length 3:02 Genre Rock - General
Tempo Medium (111 - 130) Lead Vocal Male Vocal
Mood Moving, Peaceful Subject Lost Love, Age, Aging
Language English Era 2000 and later

Lyrics

If we had more time together
Our love would surely grow
It might even last forever
Like the fairy tales I know
I would slay a fiery dragon
Risk it all to save your life
I would climb the highest mountain
Just to be by your side

If we had more time together
To never spend apart
Never tire of each other?
Or will you go and break my heart?
I will look into your eyes
And tell you what I see
Somewhere deep inside your soul
You're longing to be free

People find their soul mates
Each and every day
They drown themselves in happiness
At least that's what they say
But the truth is somewhat different
At least for you and me
Happiness has expiration dates
We often fail to see

If we had more time together
I'd wish that we were young
Back to when the times were better
And you and I were much more fun
But the years they slip away
And our love comes undone
There's nothing left to say
For the tolling bell has rung




needs better production I think

This is a very real and neutral love song, that is easy to recognize right from the start, that it's a love song and written maybe as a personal dedication of true love for someone personal to the artist. This song has a lot of potential.

Nice message

I like the lyrics and the story line.

The melody is interesting and the arrangement unique.
Keep writing. I love the line "you and I were much more fun".

This is quite an interesting idea for what i assume would be a studio demo next - fun and interesting lyrics!

Lyrics Jose Alvarez Music Jose Alvarez
Producer Jose Alvarez Publisher unpublished-as of yet
Performance Jose Alvarez-All instruments except drum machine. Label no label

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