The guitar sounds great, and the lyrics are very interesting. I like the chord progression, the main hook is catchy.

The lyrics are quite interesting in the angst-ridden manner of a UK punk song of the late 70s. They're very wordy, although with the right delivery that could work OK.

Fun and interesting tune. Steady and bouncy groove, friendly harmony and simple but strong melody. Nice job on the instrumentation, well balanced and skillfully done tracking. Vocal is distinctive, but not as strong as it ought to be in this song. Meaningful and clever lyrics. Overall, sound quality could be improved. Good work.