i liked the choice of whatever instrument that was from your synth. can hear a good tune in there for sure. interesting lyrics and some good rawness that mostly works. good build to the song. see comments.

A sort of bittersweet lullaby, cradled by two oscillating chords, that slowly fill with synth strings, sang in una surreal way, slightly out of key but in the right way.

I liked the instrumental and with the right vocals and lyrics, could be a good B side track

This song I feel is an idea that has not reached its full expression. Patch selection for instruments and vocal performance (which is really not too far off) could be better. I would like to hear this song with fuller production and more variation in the song(or at least a stronger overall sonic quality that will keep the listener engaged). Keep at it!!!

GREAT DEMO!--great music!---you gave it a great SHOT!--might want to do this LIVE sometime--thanxs--joe.

I liked the message behind the song. "Not letting anyone or anything put you down."