Kind of a hodge-podge musically. The vocals had a neat timbre and vibe but were oblivious of staying on key - like the singer honestly has some tone-deafness. Nothing meant personally but it might be interesting if you got a different singer to try their hand at the vocals. Lyrics were quite interesting though.

To be honest, this song should have had more work before submission.

ok, so lets look at the positive here..the instrumentation is actually pretty good.

this is cool reminds me of Madness in a way... sorta euro pop of the 80-90's with a modern twist.. keep rocking... ur voice was a bit low in the mix

I like the instrumental intro of this song, it has a solo career George Harrison style.

Nice Beat, I like the electronic Feel.

Has a distinctive vocal style .... although may be a niche taste

This song is unique and I think that is what makes it appealing .In Broadjam there are varying degrees of accomplishment from the professionals to people who enjoy creating music for the fun of it. With that in mind , I don't think this song will ever be a hit but I give you credit for all the effort it took to sit down and write and record this song, we all know that's no easy thing.Well done and keep them coming.