good story. well done
very pleasant listenable and likeable song, good arrangement, good clear lyrics , well sung.nice instrumentation.
great story telling...nice build through the song....always a place for a love song...very pleasing to the ear...vocals were very clear.....instrumentation never overpowered vocal. well done, enjoyed this.
really nice melody,great chorus line
I think I may have gone slightly overboard on the points, this is not 100&% perfection, it is 98% I'd say, but I really like it. It is lovely. Maybe a couple of I I I could be trimmed - they tend to stick out. But the thought is lovely, the voice is tender, it is a wonderful love song.
Lovely melody with fitting lyrics. Great instrumentation thru out. Nice job overall.