Love the opening line with its use of "young boy, run boy" - very cool. And then subsequent use of "sixteen, mean scene". Great musical accompaniment. I'm most intrigued by your end of line internal rhyming.
Great country song!! Great lyrics and hook!! Still singing it in my head!:) nice country vocals!!
A good feel for Country and Western. Great tune.
I really like this one. Good lyrics, vocals, harmonies, instruments, and rhythm. Good stuff. Keep it up.
vox reminds me of "Seasons in the Sun"....intentional?
Good recording, nice production. Snare is a little weak to my ears..I like some oomph in the smack of a snare...just me....
Lyrically doesn't grab me....but they make sense, in a songwriting way.....
Nice little foot tapper. good subtle harmony. nice deep bass drum.
Instruments sound great
addicted to life! Hope 2 hear more! BIG LIKE!