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Ogorod, in looking at your lyrics, I'm guessing English is not your first language, or probably not your second or third? If I had to have such a bad review, I'm really relieved it came from someone who writes the way you do!!!
Please, don't be offended. I'm seeking a constructive critique of my own songs and promise not to be offended. Anyway, are you here for compliments or for improving? Or are you totally confident you're good enough? Yes, English is not my native language, but don't let the mistakes, if there are any, lead you away from the sense
I also would be really grateful if you indicate the mistakes in the lyrics
Thanks for trashing my song Footsteps in the Hallway. The world is so incredibly blessed to have your expertise gracing us. How is it you can stand to walk amongst us mere mortals? You must find it terribly distressful to have to live amongst us.
Please, don't be offended. I am seeking constructive comments for my songs and I promise not to be offended
Hi. Thank you for your review of 'Minimal'. Much appreciated. David.
Hey, hope it will help you and you're not offended by my critique
No, not at all. I think your comments were constructive and useful.