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Ashley, I was reading your comments on the difficulty of recording vocals for Leviathan. That's a bummer. Ironically I've had better access to nearly everything this year and have been able to get quite a lot done. I think Georgia has been a lot less restricted than California. Anyway I write like a madman (407 songs to date) and I would love the opportunity to have you sing some of my songs at a future date if you are open to session work. Until then keep up the fight!

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Ashley Martin
over 30 days ago

Hi Dale. Wow, I'm flattered by your offer. My friend, Frank, with the studio has been more open, we were able to get some of the vocals down, but the song needs a little more work. I would be interested in seeing if I'd be a good match for any of your work! I would have to pay Frank to use his equipment, I'm sure he'd give me a good deal. Here is my email
Ashleylabeach@yahoo.com



Bob thanks for the extremely fair review of Eyes of the Devil. I'm going to implement some of your suggestions.



Bob thanks for your recent review of my song She's Gone. Very fair and thorough and I took your advice about changing the genre to Folk-country. It gave me an opportunity to check out your music as well and I'm loving it. The arrangement on Walkin' is exactly what I like to hear. It's outside of the box just enough to not be gimmicky but to embody the spirit of the piece. Nice stride piano as well. 👏



Dale, excellent song with "Romeo." Art rock and commercial...yes on both points. I have sometimes said of the great songs before the 1990s, they just don't write 'em like that anymore. Well, you're an exception and you're keepin' the faith! Best to you.

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

John wow thank you! I appreciate that. I go to great efforts to try and work both inside and outside of the proverbial box. Thanks for the encouragement

Author
John Walradt
over 30 days ago

In or out of the box, you have a clear destination. What sets you apart is that you invite us on and take us there. That takes incredible work, meticulous skill, and I admire that. That's it for now.



Joseph thanks for the 5 ⭐️ rating for Winds of Change it's appreciated

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Author
Joseph Pickering, Jr.
over 30 days ago

You are welcome Lawrence. It is a very creative song and emotionally charged song. If you get a chance check out my song He's Not a Bad Guy. best.

Author
Joseph Pickering, Jr.
over 30 days ago

Opps meant to use your first name.



Author
Ashley Martin
over 30 days ago to Dale Lawrence

Hi Dale, thank you for the endorsement! I've been in a creative slump as of late, so it's nice to get a little nudge :)

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Lol, yes I know the feeling. Read any interesting books lately? Tends to get my mind moving and out of its rut.

Author
Ashley Martin
over 30 days ago

Yes, I'm always reading. Mostly fantasy, sci-fi.



Hi Dale! Winds is a great one! Catnip

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thank you I appreciate it



Adam congrats on your success. As a fellow songwriter/artist I know that tremendous amount of work it takes to reach the upper levels. I was also wondering if you are available for session work (vocals)? Curious



Hi Dale! Thanks for your review on Mes series B, despite of the french barrier. But you got it. Pls send a review form to me anytime via the Bjam mailing system... will he a pleasure to broaden my horizon to more exotic and warm things !!

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thierry, congrats on your win in the recent contest! Could you do me a favor and do a review of my song "Buried on Saturday Morning"? Thank you.
Dale

Author
Thierry Coupey
over 30 days ago

Will do Sir !



Hi Dale, thank you for listening to my songs and for your kind words! There is so much diversity in your music, I love it! Not too many are into the funk/reggae/ska scene on this site, it's refreshing to hear!

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thanks Ashley. I think my approach to music reflects my multi-cultural heritage, as well as growing up in the Caribbean where any single radio station might play reggae, rock, soca, jazz or disco all in the same hour!



Amy hi I'm really enjoying your music. Congratulations on your success. I've written a couple of country pieces that would definitely benefit from that level of production.
Oh I noticed that beautiful is misspelled in your song title although it's correct in your lyric sheet. These things are easy to miss. And "whether they're" a sister... in line 2. Lol I hope you don't mind my OCD. Congrats again



Randall, thanks for the 5 star ratings sir, and congrats on Wonder Girl. Dale



Dale. A message came to me from you, which I think was intended for Randall Mark. You might want to redirect it. Regards. David James

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

k thanks



Hi Dale. Gratz on winning this month's top 100!

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thank you Phil. Some of the hard work is beginning to pay off! I appreciate the good word.



great song & beautiful vocal!

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thank you so much Stacy. That means a lot!



Author
Rob Smith
over 30 days ago to Adam Avery

Adam, "If I Sang Hallelujah" is a terrific tune, and it was a joy to sing. Thanks so much for the opportunity, and I hope the song brings you much success!

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Adam, thank you for your 5 star rating for Winds of Change. I appreciate it.



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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago to Thierry Coupey

Thierry"Mes Series B" is excellent!

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Author
Thierry Coupey
over 30 days ago

Oh thank you so much Penny. Eventhough it is just a vocal demo, i am trying to get it sung by a decent vocal... if you understand the meaning in french, you may want to adapt an english version of it, with your own lyrics? Why not same topic ? Would be pleased to mix that for you. If so pls send me a Bjam email... thanks again for your review!

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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago

I only know a little french Thierry so I might not be the best candidate for the song. It is a beauty though! I wish you all the best of luck with it. I can definitely imagine it in a great movie!

Author
Penny Towers
over 30 days ago

I am honored that you thought of me to do a vocal :) Thank you!

Author
Thierry Coupey
over 30 days ago

You are welcome. Just in case you get inspired by any other theme for english lyrics on this melody, I would love to collab with you on this song version :-)
I am honoured to be the one that Cyndi chose for another composition of mine, and I like the concept very much... So, may be one day ?
Cheers xoxo

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Penny Towers
over 30 days ago

Yes maybe Thierry, it would certainly be a great challenge and fun...I love Cyndi's voice! It is so beautiful and expressive and she is a wonderful spirit...Enjoy the rest of summer Thierry and thanks again! xoxox

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thierry, thanks for the 5 star rating. I am enjoying your music as well. Dale



Author
David James
over 30 days ago to Randall Mark

Hi Randall. Thank you for the 5* for 'All Mine'. As always I really appreciate it. David.

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Randall, thanks for the 5 star ratings buddy, and congrats on Wonder Girl. Dale



Bob I must say we swim in the same musical ocean my friend. I'm almost to the point where I can nail you in the review. Plz give "Back To The Circus" a listen and you will probably agree. Catnip. Also you should have many music deals by now--if you don't--please let me know! Catnip

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Bob thank you for your review of 'The Promise'. Your comments are well taken. I have actually just done a modern electro-pop take on this song which I called Can't find my way back home. I recorded this song in 1997 with meager equipment and no money at all. Would you think it 'd be a good idea to re-record drums and bass and do a fresh mix?

Author
Bob Birthisel
over 30 days ago

Just one man's opinion, but when the rest of the instruments sound so good, it's a dis-service to the song to use a drum machine to open it. And the remix would also allow you to modernize the sound overall (and solid bass with solid drums gives you the full rhythm section needed). Again, just my notes on it.



Hi Amy
Thanks for listening and giving 5* for 'White Feathers' - I really appreciate it.
Alan

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Amy thank you for your positive energy and for giving 5 stars to Higher Purpose. I have been enjoying your music very much as well. I just uploaded a video for Higher Purpose which I think you will like. Enjoy!

Author
Greg Lambert
over 30 days ago

Amy, thanks for your review and critique of "Wolfman"! Ahoooo!
Greg



Author
hazel23
over 30 days ago to Randy Calado

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Randy, thanks for the 5 star rating. I appreciate it. Dale

Author
Randy Calado
over 30 days ago

Hi Dale. You're welcome. Great song! Congrats and I wish you the best! Randy

Author
Yves Stilmant7183447
over 30 days ago

Hello Randy, Thank you for adding me, I really like what you do. Cheers from Tahoe...

Author
Randy Calado
over 30 days ago

Thanks Yves. I appreciate it. Your songs are great! Keep up the good work.



Thanks Paul I appreciate the kind words!



Thank you for the listen I hope you enjoy. Let me know if there's a specific type of music you'd like me to create



Author
Lost @ Sea
over 30 days ago to David Bruce Davis

Loaded tons of originals in hopes to spread the love of music created over 25 years with over 50 musicians!

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

David I noticed that you added my song Romeo to your playlist - thank you. I have uploaded a video for it that you may also enjoy.
Dale



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Aloha Dale I am just hearing your music , will listen to the rest , Blessings

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Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thank you. All comments are welcome



Unless I'm mistaken I haven't seen you here in a while. Good to have you back. Always loved your music ðŸ'‚



Unless I'm mistaken I haven't seen you here in a while. Good to have you back. Always loved your music ðŸ'‚



Really good

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Thanks For the compliment Paul. Any particular song / style u favored ?

Author
Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Paul I appreciate the compliment. Please check out my new song (She's Gone) when you have a minute and let me know what you think. What are you currently working on?



Impressive :-)

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Dale Lawrence WOKEPOETS.COM
over 30 days ago

Robin, I appreciate the compliment. I have sveral styles represented. Are there any particular tracks that stand out for you?



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