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Sorry bro. After reading my comment you must think I'm a jerk. I can't type worth a crap. Just thought a second hook line in the chorus besides See Saw Life would be neato.
Hi Jerry. Love your tune "See Saw Life". What would think about lifting the chorus up a little higher and finding a second phrase in the chorus instead of repeating See Saw Life so many times? I am definitely not suggesting you do anything just giving my two cents worth. Great tune with excellent market potential imo. â'®ï¸