Hey this needs the double tracked drums and tambourine, handclaps coming in at the end and you'd have Plastic Ono Band
I always suspected that John Lennon hadn't died, now I know!!
Great song, poor production in its delivery.
The tone of the piano is right where it should be. The shrill guitar has a really weird echo which helps it stand out a bit from typical solos.
i like the right and left panning of guitar vs. piano and vocals in the middle... nice mix there!
your voice is excellent for a ballad.. i like the reverb too.
the clossed hh sound really good
grey clouds lay is a great line i'm diggin the song good work buddy :)