Love the vocal ! Reminds me of David Gates from Bread .
The chorus has a very good melody & this is very well sung. The song fits the voice so well.
This song has a really good feel too it. The lyrics and melody are the kind that will stick in your head all day. The instrumentation, recording, arrangement and vocals were all very good. The song keeps your attention throughout. I enjoyed listening.
clear voice and message nice production all the way!
Really great chorus/message. This has a singer/songwriter vibe to it. Nice acoustic guitar with minimalistic production keep the focus on the singer/song. Nice bridge at the ~1;20 mark. Vocalist is perfect for this piece... a "Paul Simon-esque" sound. Nice job!
love the fresh melody......and the story too!
Well done, I could hear this as a hook for a commercial, lyrics modified to fit the product, or even left alone
This is a feel-good love song that is perfect for film scenes depicting a happy couple. I like the carefree feeling of a simple guitar track.
This is the kind of music we should be hearing in today's troubled world. It is upbeat, laden with love, and is something everyone can sing along to. Great work, really love it!
Hi Steve,
I've seen your musical credentials!!!!
I'm sure you can can turn this into a 15..30.. or 60 second money maker!
Ron
Its a catchy, upbeat happy song
Its like an earworm, gets into your head and doesn't let go
Repetitive, but that suits the mood thats being displayed towards the person of your desire
Loved the song, could have been singing my song, that is the way my own husband is.... your voice is country with out sounding hard country which I liked a lot....simple singing with guitar, vocal clear all words with clear pronunciation....Great job, nice song.
Nice job Steve! A joyful, positive, upbeat, celebratory song! I can see this attracting interest from opportunity providers looking for upbeat pop folks songs from previous eras. I see this as being rooted in times like the 60's. I wish you the very best of luck with it!
jay
Smooth flowing, soft, meets the purpose, perfect coffee shop tune.
Imagine the goodness that could come out of this with a good fretless bass playing along, or better still, a cello!!!
Great catchy and bouncy tune. Simple and really works well, the guitar sounds L/R sound great and vocals are perfect. Great song and enjoyed listening especially on a sunny afternoon here in Dublin.
Tommy