super tortured vibe............

Really like the bridge...nice contrast. Some places vocals are awesome. I hear a lot of potential

I honestly don't have anything positive to say except keep trying and keep making music I'm sure you will get it.

Reminds me of stuff that Brian Eno did or even maybe the Talking Heads. I like the generous use of the various instruments and the vocal work seems spot on to me.

This is absolutely beautiful. I particularly like the chorus..so dreamy. I like the totally manic lead vocal and the way the semi-manic backing vocals complement it, and the way the synths and sax cut through the whole thing to produce a lovely piece of work. All the instrumentation is exactly right in the mix.

The vocal performance has a lot of emotion! The song has a nice structure and I am able to follow it. I also like that the vocals hit some higher notes so there is tension in the song. I like the vibe too and sentiment... "why do lovers drift" or is it stray??