I like this. Don't know if it would ever be on mainstream radio, but I can see something like this on NPR, college stations, local community radio...I think your lyrics are pretty cool. Lots of images and pictures painted with them...lol....You do this well. This is a special kind of performance. It's more than just someone singing lyrics well. There's also got to be a stage persona that sells what the lyrics are showing us. I think you do it well. I enjoyed it.