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i did not wanna stop listening it was tht goood great work

Nikki Hornsby - Broadjam Pro Reviewer

This "I wish you know" song needs some adjusting. Title needs clarification and some work in that the balance of the intro to the ending makes a complete type circle of feelings accented with the notes of the musical message you are trying to relay. Please take this song into a place where you can focus to improve on it so that it matches some of your other musical compositions on Broadjam. I hope you understand that a song is often less in time makes it more as long as the message becomes clear to the listener. Test independently any song many times before you record and it will make it stronger than trying the other way around.

Dave Haddad (CenterPeace)

Cool sounds used, nice blending of textures. Perfect intro and when the groove hits it's nice.