Highly original (take that as a complement!). You actually have a fabulous melodic motif in the piano, (and later on in the guitar as well), you would do well to bring those out more. If not for the annoying gun sound effects (see below), you would have a great piece here. Very evocative.

Plenty of energy. Nice arrangement and quality of instrumentation. Interesting sound effects as well!

pretty cool instrumental... had a Bone Thugs n Harmony feel