Did you like specific instrumental parts-This sounded like a lion king song. Your lyric were general and I would have appreciated more specifics with a story of why she is so beautiful. I love the music and instruments mix.
1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Some what
2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? somewhat
3) Is my melody interesting? yes
4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? no
5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? Somewhat
not sure what this song is about, foreign language i dont understand
Good song, great mood and message
Very well done, could cross over to different genres. Nice instrumentation and excellent vocals. Nice song!!!
Good musical ideas. Nice female vocal in the background, nice effect. Very warm feel to the song; happy, festive and welcoming. Very nice use of synthesizers. Seriously cool vibe captured from the very beginning which is NOT always easy to do. Good parts by the 'music'. I like how the arrangement allowed for a lot of instrumental space... the strings around 1:30 were especially nice.