Like the lyrics, like the arrangement. Is it possible to make the hook clearer? Why specifically would you use the term .."the kids on Fire"
If Fire is the hook then the verses needs to have more description as to your lateral thinking.
The lyrics were good and meaningful, a good message for abuse. I liked the song.
I liked the guitar and the message.
There are a lot of quality lyrics in this song...
Great story line. Well written and very nice lyrics. I would love to hear more from this artist. Thanks for the song...