you have a full complete song

Great Rap good sounding song well put together has commercial potential.

It's rap. Titties, bitches, and mind altering awesomeness. Three deserts for a four course "commercially viable" meal. Good use of risers and white noise splashes in the arrangement. Lively performers with a lot of solid energy.

Intro "jumps" right into the piece which is thematically perfect! Well done! I don't listen to rap/hip-hop very often, except when I'm in Southern California and so for me this song has a bit of nostalgia going on, which I think works very well commercially, Kris Kross referece, etc. I like that the outro and intro matched. Despite the song not being sung, I gave the vocal pitch an excellent rating because the vocal pitch does change during the chorus hook, matching the background instrumentation very well, something that can be overlooked in hip hop.