It's hard to follow without instrumentation to help regulate pitch control - never changes though out the arrangement and you should create a bridge to help the structure of this potential and worthy song......
not used to hearing just a vocal. would like to hear a complete version of this song to judge it fairly
good message , your voice says you've lived and that fits the lyrics , there's hope in your song that will help someone someday . A few instruments softly in the background would be nice, life and thoughts put to music, well done. Blessings
Nice depth in the lyrics. Great song. Enjoyed the raw country sound of your voice. Nice job!
Sounds like the beginning stages of a song. This is the first time I have ever heard a scratch vocal recording with no instrumentation on BJ. You sang it with great feeling and the passion came through. The strong point in your song is the memorable hook/melody.
Impressive, a willingness to sing a song a Capella. I've always wanted to be able to make my voice gravelly - what a skill. Hook is good. Great message. Good melody.