good story
You had me from the first note. I loved the vocals, piano and singing. Great story telling. Did you like specific instrumental parts--vocals and piano 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.