Very appropriate melody. I can easily imagine this simple and pure tune be sung to my little 2 yo angel, as he is getting asleep after a busy day. The lyrics are calming down and the sober instrumentation at the guitar could not be more delicate. Thank you for inspiring me.
I was so impressed with the way you expertly crafted this song. You really hit the mark with your original lyric writing and heartfelt delivery. Your loneliness seeped from every note. Loved the word pictures....saying goodnight to the mirror and your old robe, still laughing at your old jokes. The bit about the old car and losing 10 lbs....it's all so real. I also liked the consistency of the rhyming structure...rhyming all those lines with "are". They were simple, but perfect. I love songs that tell a story well. Touche!