This song is very beautiful and has a lot of feeling to it. The vocals and harmonies are great. The instrumentation is excellent. Nice acoustic guitar, accordion, mandolin, bass and drums. It also had good dynamics. I love it!!! Keep up the good work.
A very pleasant, traditional and yet quite modern folk song with clever lyrics beyond the ordinary, everyday folk song. The ending feels sincere and honest, as a folk song should be, and not just a rehash of your ordinary folk songs.
This song was posted as folk. With the instrumentation, (drums, electric bass, electric guitar) I felt that it would be a better fit in the pop category. The lead vocal was a plus, as were the back-up vocals. I would have liked more substance to the song, like, why would she always be your one true love? Sure it's a pop song, but give me a reason to want to listen again.
Respectfully submitted,
CowboySlim
This is a good solid song! It's the kind of song that gets stuck in your head
Very strong vocal, nice dynamic build and good use of instrumentation. The oohs add a really nice touch to the vibe of the song. Nice job. The song itself has a "Van the Man" feel to it. Good soul.
Loved the song from the get go. I like the guitar intro and your vocals are strong and clear. Excellent word pictures and developing story in every verse. I really like the way you wrote the last verse, referring to the first three and wrapping it all up; you don't see that very often; skillfully done. Verse 3 was pretty creative (kids interrupting the "naked" Sunday plans).