Don't Go Making Promises

Song Length 4:17 Genre R & B - General

Lyrics

Don't Go Making Promises:

A promise that is broken
Is nothing but a lie
You say you do your best
You say you really try
Holding to the truth
Is a mountain way too steep
So don't go making promises
You know you just can't keep

So who's this fellow Steve
On whom you have a crush
Psychoanalyzed
I think Freud would blush
I glance into your soul
Each night I take a peep
Don't go making promises
You know you just can't keep

I wonder what you're counting
When you say you're counting sheep
I'm getting information
When you're talking in your sleep
So don't go acting innocent
My Little Bo Peep
And don't go making promises
You know you just can't keep

A roster of your fellows
You read out when you dream
Really hurts my feelings
Not being on the team
You say that you can trust me
For faith that's quite a leap
Don't go making promises
You know you just can't keep

I wonder what you're counting
When you say you're counting sheep
I'm getting information
When you're talking in your sleep
So don't go acting innocent
My Little Bo Peep
And don't go making promises
You know you just can't keep

Maybe I should go
'It's hurtin' on my soul
I just don't want to know anymore
Anymore--No--No--No

I wonder what you're counting
When you say you're counting sheep
I'm getting information
When you're talking in your sleep
So don't go acting innocent
My Little Bo Peep
And don't go making promises
You know you just can't keep

You know you just can't keep
Don't go making promises

"Don't Go Making Promises" is a soulful R&B track that captures the essence of love and betrayal.

Incredibly versatile songwriter

Here is a good concept of a song but the production could be better. Your studio work of a redo with the instrumentation might help but there is a solid grove to the music I know is there. If you want to keep the genre in R&B in my opinion you may go back into the studio with a good R&B bass professional and lay over a few creative notes before the final mix. The song has some good points but I look forward to hearing more of your other work submitted to the Pro Reviewers in the future. It's my great pleasure seeing your progressions too. God bless and keep writing!

Lyrics Charles Edmund Carter & Joe Milton Music Charles Edmund Carter & Joe Milton
Producer Charles Edmund Carter & Joe Milton Publisher Jo Dude Music
Performance Joe Milton & Loralai Milton

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