A wonderful song that takes the listener back in time maybe to their own experience. Well sung to a familiar story. Nicely balanced pro production. Well done
Nice Jimmy Buffet sounds. Good mix.
You always bring great songs and well done ....
This is a master storyteller at his best! The story is clear and fun, engaging with super-original lyrics "saltwater chromosomes" - how cool is that? I just love this song from start to finish. Another great lyric: stairs worn smooth by a million soles Searchin' for solitude. That beautifully describes the steps down to the beach. Fantastic descriptive writing...but it doesn't sound wordy or cerebral. Just down home and as real as it gets. Guitar work, vocals, production, mix...all excellent but the storytelling gets top prize in my book.
Excellent guitar chording, and very tasteful lead guitar. The minimalist keys track was a great addition.
The instrumental and vocal tracks were mixed very well. Nice laidback folk-lite jazz vibe
This is a hybrid of folk and pop, a la James Taylor. There's a lot of potential to take it further.
Really cool vibe, kind of floats through the story-line. I hear a little John Sebastian feel to this one, nice. The drums sort of have a jazz avant-garde roll to it that make the number quite unique.
About 15 seconds in, I wondered why you didn't write this from the first person point-of-view. I think it would have been more effective, had you done so, to keep the listener's interest. As is, it's an "okay" song. The instrumentation was excellent, a really nice recording.