I like this but the production quality is lacking. If you are going to have the guitar in there then let it hang out. May have to take more takes to get it right. I think some kick ass pipe organ with a bit of reverb on it might add a lot. And if you are going to have guitar, you may need to think about a more up front electric bass line. That will help the sound of your guitar out a lot.
Overall a very good production.