Guitar was cool
good hook/title. this tune has potential with better production/demo. like the guitar work.
This has all the elements of a good pop/rock song. Loved the instrumentation and the vocal presentation, especially the rhyming at the end.
Unique. Like the vibe. I connect to this song
Great song about communication. You stuck with your subject and your structure. Fun how you kicked in to full band mode and distorted guitar in the middle of the song. Kind of mirrors how communication sometimes blows up when people get angry. Probably the weakest/least original line is: Would you be true to me, but you get away with it. I like your high tenor connection hook. It's nearly right on with pitch, but something sounded a tad iffy there.
very nice how this song opens up from a blues beginning. Very good vocals. enjoyed the song.
Interesting groove, it definitely grows on you. Quite a variety of timbers and emotion conveyed.
The chorus worked realy well. I loved the voice when it went into the higher register. Nice electric guitar. Stong melody.