Hey Lil Jeremy
Its nice to hear from you and thank you for the track.
I like the feel of the track, the drum sound is nice, tight and crispy also.
The lyric as very good, good story telling, but as Ill explain later the fx is a little overpowering due to the setting of the auto tuner.
Its a good choice of instrumentation.
Its a really good chorus hook.
The tempo of the track is right for the genre.
Good use of the high pitched angelic voice at the start.