At first I didn't go for this piece, but about 15 seconds into it I liked it and I thought it was clever. I thought it was a descriptive piece of music, that conjures up day to day busy life perhaps.
I thought the combination of clarinet, piano and xylophone worked well, albeit on a software program (I think), but I am here to comment on composition, not music software.
This was highly syncopated all over the place, combined with a jazzy sound, which I appreciated.

Seems to have that "Big Band" feel, like the Dorseys. Would be good for a TV commercial, for Perrier, or some other bottled water.

Very interesting, energetic.

Very quirky and interesting and exactly the right length for this type of thing. Nice work.