SHe did a great job Greg ! The negative for me is I feel like during the chorus it seemed like her vocal got covered up a bit by the instruments. During the verses it's prefect. I think he could have pulled the instruments back just a tad during the chorus, or put the vocal more up front. Great idea to have a girl sing it !
Really nice statement without showing what side you're on. Curious about the "artifice" use...I always thought of that as a compliment..."clever"....other than that...you used a lot of words no one ever uses....without sounding pretentious. Love the ease the singer phrases some tough lines....she pretty much carried those lyrics.