Love goes wrong in a lot of places in the songwriting world, but this time it ends in the party room of The Dragon Inn, a Chinese restaurant. After 7 beers and tossing her egg foo yung, she calls it quits and he's left with the wedding ring and this sad song. The lyrics and rhymes in this song are extremely original and effective. Young/done/crumbs/numb. It's all amazing lyric writing. The vocals are clear and the vocals convey the sadness of the song. Nice guitar playing. If there's a niche for this song, it could be successful. Even if there's no market for it, it's a well-written and nicely performed composition. Bravo!
I liked the arrangement and instrumentation of this song. The song told a story with some unique lyrics and twists. It has an "old school" Country feel to it, which was refreshing to hear. It was very easy to listen to and the melody and arrangement kept me locked in.
Cool song ! Has a neat sort of haunting feel to it...
Acoustic guitar parts are well played ..